Here's the link for the peer response sheet for the Ibsen/Chopin
essay. Some of you need it to get your work done in a timely fashion. All revisions are due on Friday whether you were in class today or not.
http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0ARigzimXmDnvZGZ0dzhmcGhfNDBjNGpxYjNkdw&hl=en
Late Afternoon Installment (after a short student conference, a faculty meeting, another meeting, and setting up 5 turnitin.com folders)
1) Anyone who was absent today or who simply did not have a paper (for whatever reason) needs to arrange to trade with someone else who needs a response. Some of you know who you are--otherwise, sign-up on a sheet when you come into class on Thursday.
2) Due on Friday:
- Revised second draft (obviously take into account today's observations and suggestions, but also take a fresh look at your own style. Pay attention to elements not addressed on the peer response sheet: transitions, vocabulary improvements, "wordiness," awkward phrasing, the use of literary present, punctuation, and other details of smooth writing.
- Stamped first draft and response sheet. . . because that is the only way you will collect a few points for the "process." I stamped it to show that you did it on time, but note that I did not record them.
- turnitin.com--does not close until Friday night (11:59 p.m.) but why wait? Submit it when you finish revising. The folder is open and waitng.
Keep the parent/child "theme" in mind, and note the obvious way in which Shelley broadens the idea. Continue adding thematic elements to your mental repertoire as you see them develop.
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